You are the best arts in the world and he told us a lot of amazing things and then the cutest dog came out and her name was Gracie then i went up to her and then i said handshake then her paw went up and I was so proud of Gracie. She came to me and she went under my desk and she was fast asleep and the cutest yawn came out of Gracies mouth then.
He then showed us his magic box and that is why do we love Pete Delete, because he is the best.
I have learned that Pete is so much fun
I have enjoyed having Pete here.
Hi Roscoe I like your photo you've taken of yourself holding a giant match stick. I appreciate that you wrote a simple recount about the visit from Petedelete to room 5. I suggest you add more detail to your writing e.g Why did Pete, his wife and Gracie came to visit our class? What did Pete ask you to do? Could you also proofread your writing to check it makes sense. Keep up the good work Roscoe!
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